• Samuel sat up. He looked around his room, dark save for rays of morning sun slipping in through the blinds. His thoughts turned instantly to Clover and Melilot. If Clover can start that fire, he thought, maybe Melilot will be all right until we can return. I need to get to Sarah’s house and make sure nobody wakes her up. Samuel hurried to his closet, and dressed as quickly as he could. He headed downstairs, greeting his parents in haste, and he went out the front door. When he reached Sarah’s house, he made sure to knock, rather than ring the doorbell.

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  • “I am glad you have found me,” Ceciliate said to her two visitors. “I am attendant to Lady Piñole Alsike and Lady Arle Alsike, and to the Alsike family. My loyalty lies with them. However, I’ve heard many tales from Alfalfa’s great-great-great grandfather before he passed away about seven years ago. Burr and Alfalfa have already escorted Lady Piñole into the orange land, in search of the orange jewel. They’ll search until they find it, but I know very closely where the violet jewel is.

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  • Commentary 19.11.2008 No Comments

    I only had time for 1,179 words this morning.

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  • Sarah, Samuel, Arle, and Ceciliate stood at the edge of Aureum. A vast plain of yellow dirt spread out in all directions. The sky tinted slightly yellow above, becoming progressively more yellow farther away. Large glowing balls of light spotted the view of the land.

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  • Commentary 12.11.2008 No Comments

    My original intent was to have Cecilia not speak English. Arle and Alfalfa would be able to translate for her. But for some reason, I had her learn English, and I don’t know why. Oh, what conflict! Too bad it’s conflict between the writer and the writee…

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  • That night, Sarah finished her math work as quickly as possible. Although the sun had barely begun to set, Sarah’s room faced east, and little light entered her room. She closed the curtains, and went right to sleep, anticipating her first night as a magical girl.

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  • Commentary 12.11.2008 No Comments

    At 1,033 words, it’s clear that I cut this one short.

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  • Samuel and Sarah sat on playground swings, the hill in the center of the park to their backs, and the tennis court on the other side of that.

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  • Commentary 12.11.2008 No Comments

    With this evening’s 1,307 words, that’s 2,812 words written. I had at least an extra 15 or 20 minutes when I could have been writing, but there was no where else for this chapter to go. I’d already posted this morning’s chapter from work, so I decided against adding to it. I also decided against starting the next chapter, as I need to organize where I want things to go next. My planned events are starting to stretch themselves out (which is a good thing), so the should last me a good week.

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  • Sitting up in her bed, Sarah stretched out her arms. She dressed, then headed downstairs for breakfast. After finishing the morning meal, Sarah went outside, and headed next door. She knocked at the door. Samuel’s father opened the door, and he told Sarah that Samuel went to the park earlier. Sarah thanked him, and headed for the park.

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